Command Dynamics :: Stargate Atlantis :: John Sheppard & Elizabeth Weir Fanfics

Reviewer: shannyfish Signed Date: March 23, 2007 - 04:55 am Title: Chapter 1

This is slightly better because its more weaved in...but still not a story. Chapters would work really well using songs... I would also suggest a beta reader for grammar and formatting.

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