Reviews For something better
Reviewer: krisrussel Signed
Date: June 15, 2008 - 01:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1
There's a great idea behind the story, but the many mistakes make it difficult to read... Maybe you should try to find a beta to read it over and repost it...
Reviewer: mew Signed
Date: March 13, 2007 - 05:27 pm
Title: Chapter 1
So sweet.
Author's Response: i try, clad you like it.