Reviews For Dream Girl
Reviewer: krisrussel Signed
Date: May 02, 2008 - 05:04 pm
Title: Chapter 1
very cute and very very sparky ;^)
Reviewer: shannyfish Signed
Date: January 08, 2007 - 03:46 pm
Title: Chapter 1
this is a cute idea, but you should look into a beta reader. you have some missing words throughout and the formatting is off... thought you seem like you mostly have the characters down... some additional detailing would improve it greatly.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I know the formatting isn't very good but it isn't totally my fault. The formatting changed a bit after I'd uploaded the story!
SGC
Reviewer: Oparu Signed
Date: January 08, 2007 - 03:38 am
Title: Chapter 1
Knew it couldn't really be a blond...
Reviewer: Vicky Signed
Date: January 06, 2007 - 01:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Sweet!!
And I knew that somehow John wasn't describing his dream girl!
Reviewer: Major Dork Signed
Date: January 06, 2007 - 01:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Hee hee!!!!!!!! Mw like! You should do a sequal to this!!!!!! Totally, like a little teasing between Elizabeth and John about her dream guy!!!! :D