Great job. Loved the story. Very true to J & E
Please keep writing this one. I think your characterizations are spot on.
you have to update soon! and maybe make the next chapter a little bit longer
Ooooo trapped! I'd go wandering with my attractive colonel anytime. ;)
*loves*
Eeep! The plot thickens! Yay Geek squad!
So I meant Rodney, not Carson...
Oh I don't know how I missed this. *kicks self* it's so sweet. John and his cold shower, and poor sleepless Elizabeth. I wouldn't get up for Carson either.
hmm, intriguing! please continue!
This is really good! Loving it more and more with each chapter!
update soon!
SGC
***Save the soul of Atlantis-Save Elizabeth***
FORGIVE TPTB-but only after they've been taken out and shot!
Very nice chapter, and interesting story, hope you update soon!
This is getting even more interesting! There's John and his hero complex again. Touching the shield when one of the marines could have done it! lol
Can't wait to see what's next!
SGC
***Save the soul of Atlantis-Save Elizabeth***
FORGIVE TPTB-but only after they've been taken out and shot!
Ooo and the plot still thickens. :) Poor John and his lack of toys. Hooray for John and his heroic volunteering to get zapped!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
SGC
hehe...McKay did it...perfect.
Poor sleeping John. ;)
Yes! Thanks for taking my challenge! I've always wanted an Atlantis version! I can't wait to see what you come up with!
SGC
nice going! :) cant wait to see how this unfolds
Bring it on! ;)
An Atlantis version of Divide and Conquer?!? Cool! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
-fex