Wow, Simon hits her! I can't believe Liz stayed with him when he hits her! Couldn't she have found a better guy she doesn't love as her boyfriend before she met John? lol I bet John will be so furious he'll show up at Simon's and knock him out! ^^ Liz's mother needs to keep her nose out of her daughter's business where it doesn't belong. I look forward to the drama of next chapter!
Uh oh, caught in the act! Before that though, John sure is quite the ladies' man. After all, he knew all the right things to say. Not to mention all the right things to do. ;) hehe I love how the story is going so far and I look forward to the confrontation next chapter.
Go Elizabeth! Amazing story so far, I really cant wait for the rest!
More please? Lizzie's finally standing up for herself. Great!
YES! GO ELIZABETH!
I completely love this chapter, and Elizabeth was amazing!
I can't wait for the next chapter, this is so exciting!
wow! spiteful! i like it!
awww! sweet! very romantic
That was definetlely a great chapter. Sweet and real. Look forward to the next one! :)
Ooo...Elizabeth's mom is evil. Don't know why, but for some reason I thought Elizabeth was younger...
Way to choose John over money!
ooooh, busted! But they were so close! Poor John and Elizabeth.
Great new chapter, love to see more soon!
Doesn't she call first? Bad Elizabeth's mom....
Author's Response: thats what your focusing on?
As if the chapter title wasn't already the greatest. Just imagining the situation and look of utter shock on Liz's mom's face. Classic. And evil. Write. Faster. :-)
Oh, you're evil!!!!!!!
Please, an update!!! Soon!!
I love your story!
I'm a bit confused about the time frame. Is this a little later than the last or several years later?
I like how Elizabeth weighs what her friends think with what her parents would hear. I also like how comfortable she is with John and her friend knowing about John. Monica's sweet as well.
Author's Response: I'm sorry for the confusion, it should only appear as a little later, not years.
Usually I don't like AU stories, cause it's too weird for me to picture the characters in a different element, but I really like this one.
It's quite realistic; you keep them in character, which is vital.
Great work, I hope you add more soon!
oh i dunno, im so confused to what is AU now. everyone keeps saying different things. not just here but different places too.
Oh, I have to correct you. AU is an abbreviation for Alternate Universe. If you're writing the characters' personalities this differently than their canon states, then it's not alternate universe, it's original fiction that's just given your characters the names of the originals, no matter what your opinion may be on that FACT. I'm enjoying O.A., but I shan't be reading this particular story any further, it is far too out-of-character to hold my prolonged interest.
Author's Response: Actually, thats alternate reality and there is no option for that - either dont leave feedback or dont read the story either way...
Author's Response: The whole AU or AR thing is completely debatable, if your not gonna leave constructive remarks, dont leave a remark at all, AU and AR are what you want them to be. As I've said before - if you dont like it - DONT READ!
well i like it. i think its totally plausible for elizabeth to react this way. it is AU so u can do what u want with the setting and characters. obviously they cant change too much from the originals but still... cant wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Thank you Bridget :)
Just like the previous reviewer, I don't see it. And I definitely don't see Elizabeth crying over that. AU means alternate universe - the SETTING is what changes, not the characters themselves being this different, the way you seem to think. If that's your attitude to it maybe you should just go write original fiction and slap these characters' names on it, it would work about the same way as your claim that Elizabeth would be bought into going against something she wanted to do.
Author's Response: actually AU means anything can change, characters, setting, situations everything. if you dont like the story, then by all means, dont read it!
I liked it so far, but even with an AU, I just can't see an Elizabeth who would put money before her heart. She wouldn't try to lie to her mother, and wouldn't mind not being able to buy and decorate a house and set up another trust fund. She's way too AU right here.
Author's Response: Your the second person to say something like this, my advice is that you read it again, I did explain why Elizabeth wants that money so badly and why she lied to her mother... and your last comment "She's way too AU right here." is just crazy, it is an AU, thats the point, you're also reading back over a time when we dont know what Elizabeth was like.
Grrr @ Elizabeth's mom, she's mean. I'm interested in this fic, please write more. Quickly. :-)
Oh poor Elizabeth, oh bad mommy! What's she going to do?
Ooooo.... nice touch. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please!
What a wonderful date! I hope the title doesn't mean all three of them will be trapped in the elevator together!?! Is Simon going to make waves? What about evil mama!Liz? Looking forward to more!
ooo lovely again. I just adore John and his ferris wheels, and the bear. ;)
Bad Simon. Bad bad Simon....