Reviews For the airport trick.
Reviewer: shepweir always Signed
Date: June 01, 2010 - 08:32 pm
Title: Chapter 1
Good try but you do need some help. Cute story.
Reviewer: Oparu Signed
Date: November 10, 2006 - 12:58 am
Title: Chapter 1
Nice effort, but I think you really need a Beta. Without one it's hard to tell what you meant to get across in your story.
I think you have potential, but it needs a helping hand.
Author's Response: thanks i'll get my sister to help me with that!!