Wow. I loved your story. Thanks for the happy ending. Too many fan fictions end up sad and with tears. Just think how incredible SGA Seasons 4 & 5 could have been. If only Elizabeth had been rescued by John. That would have been one of the fans' favorite episodes. That is the story a SGA movie should be about. They would be guaranteed a success.
aww this is so beautiful :X absolutely great.. :X "time loses this round"
If only the writers of the show had thought about this sentence before writing season 4/5: "she isn’t supposed to just disappear and not be there anymore."
Love it! Especially the way that "time" permeates the whole story. It's a great topic for a fanfic and you let everything come to life perfectly. Fantastic job! :D
I loved how you can word people feelings. I think a lot of us had at least some of them, but could never put them into words. Congratulations!
This is so beautiful! I love the angst in there!
Oh! This was a wonderfully written story. Brilliant work, I really loved it. Hope you write more soon!