Hm. Not something I'd expect from Caldwell, but it's your story.
Wonderful story so far. I have to say, again, that your characterization is amazing. Keep it up!
Gorgeous story. Well written and the characterization is pretty darn spot on. I actually like that it's a dark story. Good job!
aww poor lizzie. damn that scum bag who did this to her!! who is it? im dying to know!:)
Wow...that's a lot to take in. God, poor Elizabeth. Thank god John is there for her. I'm so afraid to think of who it might be.
aww...poor Elizabeth. This is so sad...but you must write more! Sounds really great so far and I'm dying to know who would hurt her like this..and why..and how she'll deal w/ everything....
Very well written. I like John's caring for her, and I'm anxious to see who did it and what will happen when John finds out. Keep writing!