I wish you had continued with John escaping the Genii and returning back to his beloved Elizabeth. She will never truly move on. Sheppard 's love and support is so much of her strength.
Wow! write more, I'm dying to know what happens! Oh no, Elizabeth... and John crying, too. This was a great chapter.
What will happen...? Great so far, can't wait to read more!
Again, another shocking twist! Very well-written; I love the different points of view that make the story intriguing.
AWESOME chapter! It added so much to the plot and was quite unexpected. I love how she was mad at him, but the situation turned around fast. Very well written, too!
He he, other people notice John's jealousy too... I love it. Great chapter! and I love the tension of possible ambush. :-)
I love ANGST! great chapter.
Great first chapter and first fic! I love the tension between John and Dimitri. good job!
woah... not the genii! lol. update soon :)
If I had to guess, I would say that that Logan guy is the one who steps out of the gate. If that's the case then he's also probably there to take poor, helpless Elizabeth. And to that I have to say: John, run! Save her! Don't let him get her! hahaha
And I can't believe Caldwell, the nerve of that guy, Mr. "I'm taking over Atlantis."
This is very well done for a first fic. Good Job! The best part is it keeps us on our toes with all the cliffies!
I'm looking forward to reading the rest as you update. AKA update soon!
woah, no way! update soon!
cool chapter, update soon, cant wait for the next one. :)
I'm soo happy you wrote more! I love this story!
good chapter! you must update soon!
good chapter, keep 'em coming! :)
interesting! i cant wait for the next chapter. i think this is a really good first fic! well done!