Oh PLEASE finish this! This is awesome!
Compared to your last one, this is fantastic. Aww, very harsh. "John never loved you." Yes, yes. You haven't updated in 3 years, but this is worth finishing
hiya how u?
great to hear more of the story from you
'speaking of love, john could never have loved you'
that was really harsh - cant wait for more
Author's Response: Well, I had to add some anguish to it! But you are really going to hate me for what I do next chapter!
It's getting more and more interesting! Continoue great work!
Author's Response: I am typing up the next chapter now so just sit still for a while.
Wow! This is very good for your first story! You did say this was your first one, right? Anyhoo, I'm really enjoying the story and I can't wait to find out what happens next! I have this creepy feeling that it's John this time that has assaulted her! Big Tears!!! I hope things turn out okay in the long run! I would hate to see permanent damage done to their adorable relationship they had going! Will there be more Sheppard whumpage in future chapters by any chance? Hee Hee! Don't you just love it when that delicious man gets whumped? Froot Loops, I'm getting off track aren't I! Sorry! Anyhoo, loved the story and can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work! LOL!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, just so you knowno one assultes her again!
nice story opener! continoue great work! i just can't wait till next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Next chapter is coming up!
i like this opener for a story and i think it sets up the second part really well! i know i'm your beta but i really do think its good!
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you thunk it sets it up well! Oh, and thanks for that hint about the comma!