Reviews For Not Us
Reviewer: shepweir always Signed
Date: February 19, 2010 - 09:17 am
Title: Not Us
I really enjoyed this SPARKY moment. You captured them both so well. Beautiful to see them almost admit their feelings. Great job at the angst.
Please continue. This is a terrific start.
Reviewer: teyla_emmagan Signed
Date: April 20, 2006 - 05:23 am
Title: Not Us
great! i think you should write another chapter because, the I get to read more of your work!
Reviewer: john_and_lizzie Signed
Date: April 18, 2006 - 12:54 pm
Title: Not Us
good story, and i think the characters are about right so go ahead and write that epic! i'm looking forward to it! and if you need a beta or any help just get in touch and i'd be happy to try and help!