That was hilarious. Loved the naughty children line. A little out of character for Elizabeth but very well done.
OMG! I literally LOL'd from the end of the flashback part til the very end! Very cute and fun! :D
That was a hilarious story!!!!!!
Another great bit of writing! I can imagine this happening early in season 1 when they haven't all been traumatised by Wraith and other nastiness in Pegasus. Thank you for not making Beckett too Scottish like lost of other writers do... Keep on writing Katie, and I'll be your beta forever!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, I'm glad my characterisation of Carson is believable. Its only fair to give the guys some time out from all the whumping (even though John looks especially yummy when he has been scrapping!).....thanks as always for your support as my beta.