I like this story and I'd love to read more, but you really have to find yourself a beta reader, cause the many grammar mistakes sometimes make it difficult to read.
Author's Response: Thankyou! i will try to get a beta. Thankyou again for reviewing its much appreciated !!
hehe love this!
Author's Response: Awww thankyou! hopefully i will get the next chapter up soon. Thankyou for reviewing i really appreciate it!!
These are not John Sheppard and Elizabeth Weir. You took both characters so wrong. I don't know if you watched a different Stargate or what, but none of them would behave that way. Childish. Not at all.
Author's Response: Okay firstly thankyou for reviewing and i do see your point, but i think having a child has softend elizabeths facade if you get my point. I will try to make them more serious, or more to their character in the future. Anyways thankyou again for reviewing!
I'm totally loving this. Their little girl sounds so cute, and I love all the inner conflicting emotions Elizabeth and John are having. Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thankyou so much for commenting! I will have a new chapter up soon! Thankyou again.
Love this story so far. Very emotional and compelling.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review im glad you like it. I'm sorry for my punctuation and grammar spelling I'll try to go back at a later date and correct them. Thankyou again.