Heartbreakingly beautiful.
Oh, how sad! And how beautiful at the same time. Really loved this.
Yay! You did a sequel! Great second chapter, love how complex you've potrayed John's emotions to be and the comparisions between Elizabeth and Sam.
* repeats the previous motion of soothing her chest cause her heart is about to burst for the angst and hurt.
Awww! Great job. It's a poignant and beautifully written piece - both chapters. They fit the characters so well. Sorry, I'm a little incoherent because I'm a little choked up. I'm just glad you wrote this piece - it's needed.
Woah, so powerful. This is beautiful. Exactly how a RepliWeir would have worded it. *salute*
You HAVE to write some more cheerful stories! That one was so sad :(
It was really good though, great emotion and reflection of Elizabeth's feelings. Any chance of a sequel? Like John's reaction to the letter? (Hint hint)
Author's Response: If something occurs, I'll add it as a second chapter. I'm not sure I can do cheerful though :)