Reviewer: Sparky Warrior Signed Date: July 24, 2009 - 09:31 pm Title: The Next Generation

Aww. Cute =) Finally! I was hoping for someone to use "Ronon" in a name of some sort. YAY! This is actually a really good idea -passing on the Leadership to her son. Well done. *salute*

Author's Response: Thank you so much :^D
Using Ronon just seemed fitting somehow.
Again: thank you!!

Reviewer: Vixen in Violet Signed Date: July 24, 2009 - 03:45 pm Title: The Next Generation

Oh, loved this a lot! I love how Connor's thoughts of his parents' lives ultimately reflect on the beginning of his journey and if it will be similar to the first generation.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Someone on LJ asked for a sequel and maybe somewhere along the line I'll write how he's doing as leader of the Lanteans ;^)

Reviewer: From the Stars Signed Date: July 24, 2009 - 06:04 am Title: The Next Generation

"I am a true Pegasus child..." Loved the way Atlantis has become a home for everyone. You conveyed that in a short but really detailed story. Just one question, who was Ginny's mother?

Author's Response: Hehe, now that is something that should remain a mystery... especially since it's an UA, so anything could have happened ;^)

Reviewer: Lefty Signed Date: July 23, 2009 - 05:31 pm Title: The Next Generation

Frak! I totally missed that! A thousand apologies. Kudo's to Charlie :)

Author's Response: Hehe, no problem :^p
You can keep your job for now ;^)

Reviewer: Charlie Blue Signed Date: July 23, 2009 - 03:13 pm Title: The Next Generation

This is a very lovely story.

But in the paragraph starting with "I’m a true Pegasus child., the word "taught" seems to be continuously mistaken with "thought" though. If it is the way it should be, then OK. But if it isn't, then just a note.

Author's Response: Thank you and you are absolutely right about the "taught/thought"... I just fixed it. Thank you for pointing me to that. You interested in a beta job by any chance? ;^)

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