Kind of a quick ending. It was good but I was expecting more. Thank goodness Elizabeth is ok.
Author's Response: Thanks for the reply. Muse was kinda fickle so it was getting to the point of finish it quickly or not finish it at all.
Glad you enjoyed the majority of it.
Oh that was something I wasn't expecting. Poor Lizabeth
Wow! Not something I expected with the goa'uld! Good chapter
Oh man I hope John saves her from that. He better get there VERY quickly.
I love it! Keeps me on the edge of my seat and it really brings out the love... Keep it up! and update soon!! :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked.. a new chapter will be coming soon!
Boy I hope that doesn't turn out to be a trick. Hopefully that was really Elizabeth & John will be able to rescue her in the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing..... the next chapter shall be along when a I get an hour to write it :)
Poor Elizabeth. I hope she finds a way to escape before something really bad happens to her.
Author's Response: the rescue is in progress :)
OH man! Someone should have secured her house & checked out the guard in the beginning. I hope poor Elizabeth doesn't get killed. Please hurry with the next chapter.
Author's Response: Getting there...hopefully I will get some more time to write today.
Wow. This story is just getting better, and better right? Keep up the awesome work, and write some more. I can see by the other reviews that they also want you to write as well. Good luck! *prepares to beg if necessary, again...* *salute*
Author's Response: once again..no begging necessary.. all I need is the time to write it!
Great story, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: more shall be coming :)
Still a wonderful story and loved how John was comforting Elizabeth, when she realized that only four students came out alive.
Addendum to the last chapter's review (mine) and your response:
Since Georgetown is in DC and if Jack's at the Pentagon, it would make sense that he was there with John at a time like that.
Otherwise... Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: I'm in another country so I'm sorry if the geography is kinda wrong.. I try!
Glad you are liking the fic :)
Oh you KNOW it had to be a Goa'uld that set the bomb. Elizabeth had been working on a Goa'uld healing device a week before & suddenly a bomb goes off in her class? This reeks of Goa'uld involvement. I hope he/she doesn't get the chance to try to kill her again.
Author's Response: Not necessarily.......
Ahh! Almost gave me a scare then! Yay! She's alive. The determination in John to be with Elizabeth was very moving. Please, continue? *prepares to beg.*
Author's Response: LOL no begging necessary :) I'm working on the next chapter today.. lets see where muse takes it :)
Wow. Just wow. Thank goodness she's alive. Please continue this very soon. I definitely want to know what happened & why anyone would want to kill Elizabeth.
Author's Response: Wow.. thanks for the encouragement :) I 'll continue as soon as time allows.
A very great start. Like it a lot already. Loved that you threw Jack in it too.
"Dr Lamm" is "Dr. Lam" by the way. Just a note, is all.
Author's Response: Thanks.. I'll edit as so as I get the chance :) I kinda figured someone had to be there if Elizabeth was missing and John was angsting.. Jack seemed the logical choice (and everyone loves him!)