So sad but truly how John is without his reason to exist. He loves Elizabeth so much he can't conceive living without her. Great job.
A beautiful lilt and restrained tone to this piece. You effectively created a sense of isolation with that deafening silence that plagued John. After viewing season five, he looks so lonely or the whole sparks went out in him. Even with Larrin on the scene, there is just not the same kind of the flirtatious and unspoken desire between him and Weir. So this piece slots in quite well.
Well done on writing a piece that is of a different style . =)
Waw, this perfectly describes John from the last 2 season, especially in s5. Job very well done!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^^
I thought this had quite a nice sense of feeling in it... Good job! *salute* Around here, you don't get that much often so you should be happy =)
Author's Response: =) Thanks! *salutes back*