Oh! So good! I haven't read a heartwarming Sparky story in so long but this one is just amazing...well done. Totally being added to my favs.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :) If you liked my stories, take a look at my favourites, especially Jenjulia, she is just amazing.rnrnThanks for the review, made my day :D
Loved the story! Great work!
Author's Response: Thanks! :D I aim to please. Glad you loved the whole caldwell bashing, it gave me such a case of the chuckles that I couldn't help myself.
The man was like a vulture, circling Atlantis in his big phallic ship.
OMG! Best description of Caldwell ever! Hilarious :^D
Going to read the lest now!
Figured you needed a review for chapter 1 lol =D Just started re-reading it, we really did do a good job (well, you did) =P
More, more, more!
He told her he loved her... what does she do now?
Is it cheating if I give you a 5 star rating on my own fic so that you get a better overall rating? ;) good fic, I think your beta has done a fabulous job!! Haha seriously though I like your style, can't wait to see where this goes next =]
Author's Response: I'm sure nobody minds :P And thanks :D
Right, John's said he loves Elizabeth but now she needs to tell John she loves him!!
Poor John though. It must have been horrible for him all alone in Epiphany! (I prefer your version- that he missed her so much- rather than the episode version where he seemed quite happy with that Ancient woman!)
Update soon!
SGC
Author's Response: I was getting to that, rest assured, smooching will ensue ;) Hope you don't mind the slow pace. I'm of the opinion that love is never easy.
Oh that was brilliant! I was in two minds during that argument, I thought that Elizabeth was either gonna hit him or kiss him! I guess the former was right, but then we had her emotional breakdown!
And just wow...I really love this fic!!
SGC
More! ASAP! Yesterday!
I totally loved this, I like to see her snap and deal with consequences. Write more soon. *claps*
Author's Response: Will be happy to oblige ;)
I wish you luck then! Because (as I said in my last review) I still have no idea where this is going but I still love it!
Sadly, I don't have any idea's to help you with the IOA cliche, I generally skip over that factor, by not mentioning it because my fics always finish with them getting together and so there never is any talk about the IOA.
I hope you think of something soon!
SGC
Hey I definitely wish you luck! I really, really like this, you're doing a great job. If you want to bounce some ideas, I'll be glad to help! Keep going!
I like this, and I like your style. Great writing of Elizabeth, I really can't wait to read more - Epiphany is one of those episodes that never has enough fanfics. Can't wait for more, keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks! Wasn't sure if I could pull it off, being a guy and all. Anyway, third chapter coming soon, be prepared for a major mood change ;)
Ooh, I have no idea where this is going, but I like it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Comments like yours keep me going. Hope to get the third chapter up soon!