Just read the whole thing in one night and thought it was really good! Liked the ending when they got to be together on Atlantis not stuck on Earth and thought the gradual build up of their feelings worked well.
Just one small thing, maybe slightly smaller paragrpahs, it got a bit hard to read sometimes. Apart from that loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'll keep the smaller paragraphs in mind...
Thought I'd add my voice to the rest :) Good job!
Author's Response: Thx! :^)
Aww wonderful ending =] I love this fic so much, very well done! *adds author & story to favourites* keep up the fab writing!!
Author's Response: yay for my most loyal reviewer!! Thank you so much, it's because of loyal people like you that writers like me love to keep on writing. I'm working on the next story, so keep your eyes open ;^)
Aww so sweet =] another good job on this, keep it up
Author's Response: Again, thank you very much. The next chapter should be up tomorrow.
More! (I'm in love with this fic) love the moment at the end!! Its so cute =D can't wait for next chapter *falls off seat* 5stars =]
Author's Response: lol, thank you again! But don't fall of your seat... It'll hurt too much... Next chapter will hopefully be up in a few hours.
Nice good job! I was waiting for this to get uploaded ^^ if there is another chapter that would be awesome =D and nicely written, 10/10 =]
Author's Response: Another Thank you! And yeah, there are going to be a few more chapters... I like to wrap up all the loose ends ;^)
Wow nice =D I like this its pretty cool ^^ please upload another chapter! =P I promise I'll review loads ;)
Author's Response: Thx! New chapter will be uploaded later today or tomorrow.
First of all, I really like the pitch. I have read more fics in which Sheppard is considered dead at some point, but here it is at the center of the story and it really made it stand out to me.
It also made me want to read on, and made me curse when I had reached the end. So kudo's there.
You may want to consider formatting the text a little better however. In the larger blocks especially I frequently lost track of where I was. Formatting often makes the story more attractive to read. Could be just me though ;)
Lastly, thanks for your review :D More coming up soon. And if you still need a beta, I am up for it.
*sighs* very sad, but also very nice moments here. and the scene with the photograph in the book... perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it... And I'm also very glad someone is reviewing my story. So again, thx for your honest comments.rnI'm still working on the 4th chapter, but I'm hoping to be able to post it tomorrow.rnThat one will end with a major cliffhanger ;^)
aww. I love the flashback...well and the story anyway! I just hope there's still something good cpming out of the mess of the first two chapters... Well done. Keep up the good work! :D
Author's Response: Thank you... and it's gonna be better... just a few more chapters patience ;^)rnI should be able to post the new chapter tonight when I get home from work.